WALT to use the correct structure and language in our writing.
On Saturday
On Saturday I went to the movies in Kerikeri with my two aunties and my uncle and my
cousins.
First we got ready to go to the movies.I got dressed and I put on my shoes. When we were getting ready to go to the movies I was saying to my cousin,”Should we go outside when we are finished?” She said, “Yes.
Next we went to the movies. When we were going to the movies I said to my cousin, ``Do you want to play gacha life?” She said,”Yes”
So we played gach life. It was fun playing gach life.
I felt happy and I was laughing because my cousin made a funny person. Then we finally got to the movies.
When we got to the movies, me and my cousin were saying to my aunty, “Can we get some ice cream?”
She said “Yes”.
We were so happy that we could get ice cream. After that we got some popcorn and our tickets and then we went to watch the movie. The movie was Son
ic the Hedgehog. When we were watching the movie and eating our popcorn, it was so cool. I felt very happy. The popcorn was very buttery to me and my cousin. I felt amazing because we were at the movies and I thought it was very fun. Finally we went home. I had a blast because I got to go to the movies with my aunties and uncle and my cousins. I had a great time.
ic the Hedgehog. When we were watching the movie and eating our popcorn, it was so cool. I felt very happy. The popcorn was very buttery to me and my cousin. I felt amazing because we were at the movies and I thought it was very fun. Finally we went home. I had a blast because I got to go to the movies with my aunties and uncle and my cousins. I had a great time.
Kia ora this is Amethyst I enjoyed the part when your cousin and you were playing gach life it was probadly it was fun. When I read your post I learnt that when you were telling your readers that you put what where who and with.and make sure you went to the teacher.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you played gacha life
ReplyDeleteWhy did you go to the movie You taught me poppy words.
Kia ora, Anetta-may my name is Hikurangi I relly enjoyed the part when you went to the moves. but can you please start Reading your story please.
ReplyDeletebut keep up the good work.
Kia ora Anetta-may.Iam Kora.I enjoyed the part when you played gacha life This part gave me a memory about when I went to the movies and watched incredibles. Next time, you couldput in jusey words.
ReplyDeleteKia ora I´m Josiah.I enjoyed the part when...you went the movise.
ReplyDeleteNext time, you could..read it.
Hi Anetta-May
ReplyDeleteMy name is Milan and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School.
I really like your writing about your day at the Movies.
I liked your work because it told me what you did on your Weekend.
Blog ya latter
Kia Ora Anetta-May, it is Chevy-Anne.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you watched gach life.