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On Tuesday night I went to king wah. I went with my mum and baby brother. We were going out for dinner because it was Te Ihi’s birthday.
First my mum got Mahu ready. He was jumping up and down after he got dressed.
Then I got dressed for king wah and I went to play with Mahu and we were laughing.
Mahu went to my mum and I went to my room.
Next me and Mahu got in the car and I got in the car and mum drove to Paihia.
I was excited because we were going to king wah.
After that we finally got there and I saw Dallas and Dakota. My mum went to pay and Mahu went with Dallas and one of my other cousin’s and I went by Dakota and we played on her phone. Then we got to choose our food. I chose meat and my mum chose noodles.Then we went to sit down.
Then we all went outside and played tag.
Finally we went home. I felt happy because I went to King Wah.
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