Here is my writing sample for Term 1 2021. I think my writing has improved because I can use more interesting words to add more detail to my writing.
On Saturday night my family and I went to gengens.We all got nicely dressed up for dinner.First we got dressed up in some nice clothes.After that we drove off to Whangarei I said to Dallas and Ame ¨ Should we ask Tom if we can stop at the dairy´´ ¨ Yes we should ask Tom if we can stop at the dairy´´They both replied.Next we ask Tom.He said yes we can stop at the dairy,I thought he was going to say no to us but he instead he said yes to us.Then we finally arrived at gengens.I was as happy as a clown when we got there I rushed out of the car I was as fast as a cheetah.We all walked inside and the first person I saw was Taria I was so glad that she was there because she is my best friend in the whole world. Later on me,Ame and Taria got some ice cream and pancakes because we already had dinner but my mum said stop and think do you need that much sarga and we said no we don't need that much sarga we both replied.Finally we all went home.On the way home me Dallas and Ame went to sleep.We had a wonderful day and dream.Anetta
Ideas 4
I have lots of ideas that connect to the topic with some extra information.
Structure
Language 4
I have all of the structure and one part may be well developed.
Organisation 4
I put my ideas in groups and order.
Vocabulary 4
I chose words to make people want to read my story.
Sentence
Structure 4
I can write most of my sentences correctly.
Punctuation 4
I can use some other punctuation correctly.
Spelling.
I spell most of the essential list words correctly.
